Tuesday, March 10, 2009

Intimate poem

Dear Stevens Pass,

I wish you would stay snowy
all year long.
I wish you would stay white
like my tee shirt in July.
Instead of putting on
your ugly brown outfit.
You should stay white
and pillowy.
All year long

2 comments:

Nels Bergquist said...

Excellent poem! Great use of metaphor.

Anonymous said...

I'm pretty sure I know what your writing about. Is it snow? I wish the same thing! I really like snow but actually I'm glad we don't have it ALL the time. If we did we wouldn't love it as much when it does come.